Tuesday, June 21, 2005

JuPoWriMo #2

Suspense

Counting the quivers
that bust through the suspension
of our 1960 Corvair:

rough going
and inside
I imagine the "ahh"
that comes
when the man inside me
drinks weird alcohol.

But there is no air
in the suspension of this Corvair,
no sighs inside but squeaks.

The air cooled rear engine
would prove itself
but not to me.

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